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Recap: Sundance Collab Week 4.

August 20, 2023August 20, 2023 Chasing The George

Hello, my fellow artists! I am recapping my weekly experiences of the writing course I’m taking at the Sundance Collab. These recaps are a cool insight into the creative process and personal journey of building something from scratch. In this case, a feature film treatment.

Recap: Week 4. Last week, I shared how my causative routine was going, plus the creation and exploration of the other characters in my feature film. This week’s class was exciting because it focused on the overall arc of our story. What’s our story about from beginning to end? Also, how do the characters drive the story forward? Our homework was to write a one-to-two page summary of our story. The basic beginning, middle, and end. Keep reading below 🙂

Woo hoo! Here was an opportunity to tell my story from beginning to end. Here was an opportunity to see if my idea could go the distance from fade in to fade out. Let’s do this! The homework also confirmed what I learned in class: Each new generation consumes more and more stories via film, television, and streaming, and so most people today inherently have a strong sense of storytelling. I share that because I was pleasantly surprised at how much story poured out of me when I sat down to type. I understood the overall framework and arc of my story. I knew where it started and where it ended. When I finished, I had written several pages worth of my summary LOL. Good problem to have because I can always edit it down. I can always cut the cloth shorter. Keep reading below 🙂

While editing, I kept telling myself to focus on the main points. Describe more succinctly. Don’t be precious with every word. Get it down to one to two pages. I finally did and sent it over to my advisor for feedback. I felt accomplished. I felt like I did my best. She said I did a great job and that she loves a sports story. She also asked me a couple of questions regarding my story and to make sure that the emotional drive for my character is coming through. Her feedback and questions were helpful and they inspired me to continue looking at my story and ask more questions. Keep reading below 🙂

See you all next week when I recap week five! (Oh yeah, ever since this course began, I’ve also been doing extra research outside of class that will help me out when I eventually write my feature film script.)

Recap: Sundance Collab Week 3.

August 13, 2023 Chasing The George

Recap: Week 3. First, my causative routine is going great. The schedule that I have created has set me up for success with this course. This week was about the creation and exploration of the antagonist and other supporting characters in my protagonist’s world. Just like I did last week with my protagonist, I had to fill out the same character questionnaire for at least two more characters in my story. I chose the antagonist and the love interest. Keep reading below 🙂

In addition to filling out the character questionnaires, I also had to identify character qualities for my antagonist and love interest to create conflict and opposition with the protagonist. In other words, their assets and liabilities (like I also did last week for my protagonist.) There were certain qualities I was able to identify quickly, while others became placeholders. To get more clarity on these placeholders, I looked them up in different online dictionaries. I also looked at my protagonist’s qualities and asked myself, “What’s the opposite of these?” So if Luke (the working name of my protagonist…remember, I jokingly lamented last week that I’m bad with creating character names LOL) is reserved and shy, then Adam (the working name of my antagonist) is loud and cocky. Now I have Abbott and Costello. I have the beginnings of conflict. Keep reading below 🙂

I want to keep carving out my antagonist to make sure they are not bad just for the sake of being bad. In their mind, they are doing the right thing. They don’t think their actions are wrong. Keep reading below 🙂

I also wanted to share that I had to be willing to turn off “My Story Can Beat Up Your Story”. I’ve used this book by Jeffrey Alan Schechter since 2014, so I had some fear and nervousness of letting it go. But going into this course, I made a commitment to lean into this new teaching instead. I wanted to be open and present to a different approach. And it’s been going great! That being said, Jeffrey’s book has come in handy a couple of times as a reference point, a translation point, where I said to myself, “Oh, Jeffrey calls that the thematic synthesis. Oh, he calls that a compelling goal. I got it. It makes total sense in terms of what I’m learning now.” It’s like an actor having an established approach and then going into a new school to study. The new school teaches them about “moments” and the actor says, “Oh! A moment is like a beat. Got it.” Or the new school teaches them about “urgency” and the actor says, “Oh! Urgency is like picking up the pace. Got it.” So it’s been cool to hear some things in a different way that still translates and makes sense to me. Keep reading below 🙂

See you all next week. Week 4 will tackle story arcs, beginnings, middles, and ends, and story plot. And at some point, I’ll talk about office hours with our advisor.

Recap: Sundance Collab Week 2.

August 6, 2023 Chasing The George

Recap: Week 2. This week was a testament and confirmation of what I talked about last week in terms of asking the next question. Week 2 was all about the creation of my main protagonist! My hero! The person the audience will follow and root for from beginning to end. There were three homework assignments for this week. The first homework assignment contained 29 questions to help me create my character and understand who this person is. At first, I was like WTF at some of the questions, but I realized that each question (and answer) painted more of my protagonist’s picture. I discovered things about my character that I would not have thought about or considered if it wasn’t for these questions. And I realized that a few of these discoveries will make their way into my script as dialogue and moments (I see what you’re doing there, Sundance!) The second and third homework assignments continued with the exploration of my protagonist. Some of these things will also make their way into my script. Keep reading below 🙂

I also created a causative routine that set me up for success. I will continue to utilize this routine each week because there’s a lot of homework. I know which day I start my homework, and I use the WHOLE week to carve it out. As I mentioned last week, I took the pressure off myself to have all the answers in one day. Having a routine allows me and my work to breathe. Each day provides an opportunity to know more and push my work further. I gain greater insight into what I’m creating through my causative routine. When I finish my homework for the week, I feel like I have done my best. And just as important, my causative routine keeps me SANE because I’m not scrambling or cramming to get it all in. Keep reading below 🙂

Outside of the assigned homework, I also did research to find real-life prototypes for my protagonist in terms of images and interviews. This research helped me to see and hear my character in three-dimensional form. And in turn, this research informed my homework. I also realized that I suck at creating character names LOL. It’s the reason why I recycle the same names in my writing work LOL. I somewhat agonized over finding names for my protagonist (and the other characters in their universe.) I had to remind myself of the importance of placeholders. Don’t get precious. Pick a name and move on. I can always change them later once I learn more about my characters. Or not. Perhaps Luke is the best name for my protagonist. I mean, names are important, right? It’s a part of their identity. Right? I’m going to be dedicating my entire life to these characters, so I gotta love their names, right? Right? RIGHT? LOL. See you all next week for a recap of week 3!

Recap: Sundance Collab Week 1.

July 30, 2023 Chasing The George

Hello artists! As mentioned last week, I got accepted into a screenwriting course at the Sundance Collab. This course will help me take an idea for a feature film and create a fully realised treatment for it. Also, as mentioned last week, I am recapping and sharing my personal experiences each week as I build a feature film treatment from scratch.

Recap: Week 1. Two things I wanted to share. 1) Everything really boils down to, “What is this about?” Whether I’m doing a scene in acting class or writing a movie, it’s all about understanding what something is about. That’s the driving force that helps paint the picture (or write the script, in this case) and informs the choices we make. Keep reading below 🙂

2) I also told myself to take the pressure off. Looking at the homework for week one, I felt I needed all the answers to everything in one day. For example, I felt like I needed to clearly and expertly articulate what my movie was about in one day. And when I couldn’t, I started to have a little doubt. “Uh oh, what did I get myself into? Perhaps this is a stupid idea for a movie.” I had to handle myself to remove this pressure and doubt. Once I did that, I allowed my training to kick in. I said that I have to be okay and comfortable with the unknown. I’m starting a journey from scratch. Don’t be afraid of the unknown. Why? Because I can ask the next question. I asked the first question that came to me. Great! I now had either a placeholder or a definitive answer. And from there, I kept asking the next question. Each placeholder or definitive answer allowed me to take another step forward. Each answer provided more clarity. I allowed myself to be patient with the homework and to let the answers come to me. I did what I could to fill in the blanks each day. As the days in week one progressed, I started thinking about other movies and art forms that could help me shape and articulate my answers. I also got on my feet, walked around, and attempted to answer my questions. By the end of the week, I finally arrived at an “a-ha” moment. I knew what my story was about. Keep reading below 🙂

Ask the next question no matter what it is: rehearsals for a scene, an audition, a script you’re writing, etc. See you all next week for my week two recap on developing the protagonist!

My Acceptance Into Sundance Collab!

July 23, 2023July 28, 2023 Chasing The George

Hello, fellow artists! I applied for a feature film writing course at the respected and prestigious Sundance Collab and got in! I’m taking their Screenwriting: Core Elements course because I have an idea for a feature film, and this course will help me create a fully-realized treatment for it. I would love to take you all on this nine-week journey. I won’t share any proprietary information from the course, but I’ll share my personal journey/experiences each week to create a feature film treatment from scratch. Keep reading below 🙂

And just for fun, I included my answers to two of the questions on the application. Keep reading below 🙂

Enter a brief bio (max. 200 words) I am a fierce Dominican and Puerto Rican entity who was born and raised in a mythical land called Brooklyn. I attended Vassar College (which is located in another mythical land called Poughkeepsie.) It was at Vassar that I discovered that goddess Meryl Streep graduated from there. Soon after graduation, I moved to Los Angeles to find Meryl Streep. Then, I shifted gears and focused on discovering and applying my raison d’être: To open the closet door, and through storytelling, reveal another side of life that is usually kept hidden: Stories about Latinx and queer experiences, unconventional relationships, the notion of what is beautiful, etc. Since living in LA, I’ve written two feature films, two pilots and corresponding episodes for them, numerous short films, and I’ve pitched one of my series to CBS, Showtime, Logo, Here, and YouTube. I was featured in the Huffington Post’s Medium website for my weekly industry blog called Chasing The George. Since 2015, my blog highlights the journey I’ve been on to build the artistic career I want, while also sharing the advice and lessons I’ve learned along the way. Keep reading below 🙂

If your identity or background is a strong influence on your work, please elaborate on that here. I remember being 12 years old and telling my 5-year old nephew that I wanted to be Superman (Superman was the reason why I wanted to be in the entertainment industry.) He said to me, “You can never be Superman.” I asked, “Why not?” He said, “Because you’re brown.” I was crushed by his statement. I felt that he had obliterated my dreams. But as time went on, I couldn’t fault him for saying that. I ended up feeling for HIM because I knew his statement came from a lack of minority representation in the media. It came from a limited view of what we, as marginalized people, can do. And so I committed to changing the narrative so that my nephew, and all other marginalized groups, could SEE infinite possibilities. I write to out-create limitations and to create infinite worlds of possibility. I write to see myself, my stories, my voice, and my experiences. I write to be counted and included in the human experience. I understand the power of art to create change, inform, inspire, provoke, and celebrate. Writing allows me to do all of that and be my own Superman.

Which Writing Competitions To Submit To.

July 2, 2023July 2, 2023 Chasing The George

For my fellow screenwriters and TV writers out there who are interested in submitting content to writing competitions, but don’t know where to start, I hope that my blog entry will help. I have been submitting to writing competitions this year (and in previous years.) And let me make it clear that because the writers strike is still going on, the information I’m providing is done with respect and support to their cause. The information provided does not go against the writers strike rules.

I read a great interview for pre-WGA writers titled, “Writers Strike Dos and Don’ts for Pre-WGA Writers, Explained by the WGA” that has confirmed and shaped how I’m writing today’s blog entry around writing competitions. Keep reading below 🙂

As with film festivals, there is a PLETHORA of writing competitions. It can feel daunting when looking at the myriad choices out there. For example, when I logged into my Coverfly account today, the dashboard listed 194 writing competitions. 194?! What?! By the way, “Coverfly is the industry’s largest screenwriter talent-discovery platform, connecting emerging screenwriters with literary managers, agents, producers and development executives.” It’s a central, convenient hub that contains a huge listing of different writing competitions. Keep reading below 🙂

Submitting to writing competitions as a way to get your work out there, to get noticed by the industry, and to receive feedback or coverage, can become expensive. Don’t just blindly submit because submission fees add up quickly. The best advice I can give you before you begin your journey is to do your homework and research. Aim for the big ones (because why not?) and aim for the ones geared to the type of script you have written for a more specific, bullseye approach. Not all competitions are equal and built the same way. Some have been around for a while and are highly-regarded and respected. Others are brand new and have only been in the game for a year. Some competitions come and go. Keep reading below 🙂

Some factors to consider: how long the competition has been in existence, its mission statement, its end goals for the writers who enter and win, the judges involved in the competition, the sponsors behind the competition, whether it is a genre-specific/niche competition that matches your script, etc. Do the research and decide for yourself. Listen to your instincts and use your common sense. Also, read the WGA interview at the end so that you understand the do’s and don’ts of writing competitions while they are on strike. Keep reading below 🙂

Below, I have listed 10 established, industry-recognized writing competitions that I have been submitting to this year (and in previous years.) Plus, I included a link to Coverfly. I found these writing competitions based upon industry colleague recommendations and through my own research. There may be a lot more established, industry-recognized writing competitions, but at least this list will get your wheels going. And with the exception of the Academy Nicholl Fellowships which only focuses on screenplays, the other competitions listed below accept both screenplays and TV scripts. If there is an asterisk (*) in front of a particular competition, it indicates that they have put out a written statement that they support the WGA’s strike efforts and will not go against their strike guidelines. For those competitions below (or any not listed here) that haven’t put out a written statement regarding their support of the writers strike, reach out to them directly. And before you submit, read what the WGA recommends in their interview below. Keep reading below 🙂

WGA Interview: https://www.moviemaker.com/writers-strike-rules-pre-wga/

1) Academy Nicholl Fellowships: https://www.oscars.org/nicholl

2) *Austin Film Festival: https://austinfilmfestival.com/submit/screenplay-and-teleplay-submissions-2/

3) *Final Draft Big Break: https://www.finaldraft.com/big-break-screenwriting-contest/

4) Page Awards: https://pageawards.com/

5) *ScreenCraft: https://screencraft.org/screenwriting-contests/

6) Scriptapalooza: https://scriptapalooza.com/

7) Script Pipeline: https://scriptpipeline.com

8) *Shore Scripts: https://www.shorescripts.com

9) *The Black List: https://blcklst.com/

10) Tracking Board Launch Pad: https://tblaunchpad.com/

11) Coverfly: https://www.coverfly.com/ “At Coverfly, we proudly support the rights of writers and the WGA’s efforts to ensure fair compensation for their work. Coverfly stands in solidarity with the WGA and its efforts to ensure fair, livable compensation for the work of writers. For information on how you can stay within the WGA strike rules and procedures while submitting for competitions, please contact the competition organization directly.”

What Is Your Artistic Reason For Existence?

April 23, 2023 Chasing The George

Raison d’être: reason for existence. the most important reason or purpose for someone or something’s existence.

What is your raison d’être? Why do you get up every day to be an artist? What is the engine that keeps you going in the creation, passion, and involvement of your art? I would love to read yours in the comments section! Check out my raison d’être below…plus a picture of me embracing and expressing it as a young kid in kindergarten.

I AM HERE. And I am here to create. Art is the motherfucking vehicle for me. I am the most alive, happiest, and dangerous when I am creating art. I am a star of the worlds I create and I can be whatever I want to be in those worlds. I do not limit myself because others limit themselves or because of societal expectations, prejudices, and stereotypes. I love being seen and heard through art. TO BE SEEN! TO BE HEARD! Because my face matters. My voice matters. My stories matter. You see and hear me because art is powerful. It is universal. It transcends all. The time is now. I have always wanted to be–and have always been–the exception to the rule of what I can do/am supposed to do, and art allows me to do that. When I utilize art to be the exception to the rule, I body slam myself into endless possibilities, and as a result, I body slam humanity into having an experience. And through my work ethic, my professionalism, my empathy, my tough love, my God-given talents, my creativity, my charm, humor, irony, my intelligence, my assets and my liabilities, the world will see living proof and testament that Superman is also brown and queer. Keep reading below 🙂

**I don’t remember this teacher’s name, but I thank her so much for encouraging me to play and be an artist…to live in my raison d’être before I even knew what that word was! See picture below 🙂

What Are Your 1st Quarter Wins?

April 8, 2023April 13, 2023 Chasing The George

Hello! The first quarter of the year is done, and a second one has begun. Time flies by, doesn’t it?! I thought this would be a good moment to reflect on some of my career wins of 2023. I’d also love to read your wins in the comments section below. This career is for life. It can get easy to lose perspective and think we are not gaining, growing, accomplishing, or winning. It’s easy to forget how great we are. So it’s important to take stock of our wins so that we remain in a state of gratitude within the “grind” of our careers. It also lets me see the A to B to C to D of my progression from one day/week to the next. I see exactly how I have been putting this puzzle together for what I want to achieve this year on the acting and writing sides. So sit back (or lean forward), jump into some of my wins, and I hope to inspire you to take stock of your wins and share them with others.

Acting wins: *Self-tape audition for a role in “Hacks”. *Uploaded my new theatrical headshots onto Actors Access, Casting Networks, Casting Frontier, and IMDB. *Created a pitch “For Your Consideration” email for my agent. *Came back to Scene Study 3.0 at the Richard Lawson Studios and started attending the first four weeks via Zoom. Now, I’m physically back in person. *Submitted my picture and resume to a feature film. *Secured commercial representation. *Celebrated the 29th annual SAG Awards and concluded my time on the SAG Awards Nominations Committee. *Celebrated the Academy Awards. *Casting director Stacey Pianko provided feedback on my self-tape audition as part of the SAG-AFTRA Foundation Casting Access program. *Emailed thank you message to Stacey Pianko. *RSVP’d for another casting director workshop with Emily Fleischer through the SAG-AFTRA Foundation Casting Access program. Keep reading below 🙂

Writing wins: I was gifted the latest version of Final Draft to continue rocking and rolling on my writing. *Submitted my feature film script to the following writing competitions: Page Awards, Script Pipeline, and Screencraft. *Submitted my half-hour pilot script to the following writing competitions: Page Awards and Script Pipeline. *Re-edited my TV series bible. *On February 12th, I started posting my weekly blog entries again!! *Read different industry articles. *I generated 12 story ideas utilizing chapter one of “My Story Can Beat Up Your Story” by Jeffrey Alan Schechter. *Researched classes at the Sundance Collab. *Reached out to different organizations to take my blog to the next level. Keep reading below 🙂

Ongoing acting and writing wins: *Watched different shows and movies to find scenes to do in class. *Posted updates consistently on Instagram stories, Facebook, and Twitter. *Weekly relationship map outflow. *Practiced sides weekly to keep my memorization skills sharp. *Adhered to my policies every single week. *Writing sessions every Wednesday with Kelly Tighe for the feature film script being developed in PDP 3.0. *Looked up casting director workshops through the SAG-AFTRA Foundation Casting Access program. Keep reading below 🙂

At the Richard Lawson Studios, we teach the concept of “arrogance”. The particular definitions we focus on are “claiming for oneself” and “pride”. Pride in what I am creating and accomplishing. And if those definitions don’t inspire you to let your light shine, then I’d like to share a quote by Marianne Williamson that Kelly recently reminded me of:

The Final Chapter: 7 Story Ideas in 7 Days.

April 2, 2023 Chasing The George

Last Sunday, I updated everyone on how it went with the challenge I gave myself to generate 7 story ideas in 7 days: https://chasingthegeorge.com/2023/03/26/7-story-ideas-in-7-days-part-2/

I ended up generating 12 story ideas! I also mentioned last Sunday that I would complete the second part of the story generator exercise in chapter one of “My Story Can Beat Up Your Story”, by Jeffrey Alan Schechter: Try to give your story ideas a strong wish fulfillment, emotional dimension, market-savviness, and originality. Any that don’t hit all four points, take out behind the barn and Old Yeller ’em. Of the ideas that survive, put the best one aside for later.

Here are some of my observations. 1) Of the 12 story ideas I generated, two were a YES because they fulfilled the four categories above the strongest. Four story ideas were MAYBES, and six were a NO. These maybes and nos were weak in at least one of those four categories. Keep reading below.

2) With the exception of three story ideas, I was able to find similar movies within the same zip code for the other nine story ideas. And at some point, I’ll watch the trailers of all the movies I wrote down during my research. Fun fact: For one of the story ideas I generated, there were a ton of movies already made about it. Who knew that feature films about bakers were so popular? LOL. Keep reading below.

3) From doing these chapter one exercises, it helped me to revisit an idea I’ve been wanting to develop further for a while. I was able to carve out this idea a little more, and it won’t leave me alone. I ran it through the four categories and it came out as a yes as well. Keep reading below.

4) I was pleased that I was able to set up the orphan status for each protagonist I created over the 12 story ideas. Some were more orphaned than others, but they were all orphans. What do I mean by an “orphan”? According to “My Story Can Beat Up Your Story”, every protagonist travels through four character archetypes within a feature film (orphan, wanderer, warrior, and martyr.) Each archetype represents a specific moment of the protagonist’s journey, and they help them fulfill a complete arc of change from beginning to end. Every protagonist starts as an orphan of some kind. They stand out or are different in some way because of their choosing or because society sees them as that. Some unfortunate or challenging circumstance has already fallen upon them when the movie starts or will fall upon them. We immediately empathize and root for the protagonist because we see their orphan status in the first act. Keep reading below.

5) Even though I came up with 12 story ideas, there were only a couple that I would consider developing further. Again, I’m not being critical of or judging what I generated. What I mean is that I want to be passionate about the things I write. I don’t want to devote my time to writing a script I’m not passionate about. Being passionate about what I want to write was a big takeaway from this exercise (and a reminder.) Now, I think it’s time to throw my hat into the ring and take this nine-week feature film course through the Sundance Collab. I just have to choose which idea to take with me!

7 Story Ideas In 7 Days. Part 2.

March 26, 2023 Chasing The George

Hello my fellow artists! Last Sunday, I challenged myself to generate 7 story ideas in 7 days by utilizing the story generator exercise in chapter one of “My Story Can Beat Up Your Story” by Jeffrey Alan Schechter. Here is the link to that blog entry: 7 Story Ideas in 7 Days. Part 1.

And as promised, here is part two where I update you all on how it went! Below, I have italicized Jeffrey’s prompts for context. I also copied and pasted the story generator website at the end so that you can try it at home!

Pick a description from Column A such as “ugly,” “creative,” “brave,” etc. Turn that word into the ultimate expression of that description: “ugliest,” “most creative,” “bravest.” Pick a profession from Box B such as “astronaut,” “soccer coach,” “school teacher,” etc. The first few times I did this, I wanted to be intentional with the pairings. Meaning, I went through the descriptions in column A until one resonated with me. Once that happened, I went through the list of professions in column B until one resonated with me as well. Then, I paired those words together to arrive at a newly-invented character. For example, Bravest Disc Jockey. Keep reading below.

Set the timer on your phone for five minutes. Without stopping to think, crank out a story idea for the “somethingest character” you just randomly invented. The “ugliest blacksmith” or the “most fearful pilot.” Once I invented a character, I was on go. I followed whatever impulses came to me. I did not question or critique the spontaneous story idea I was generating in real time. Once my five minutes was up, I let it go. I didn’t dwell. I moved on to generate the next character combination and story idea. There were a few moments where I stopped in the middle of a story idea, and it was in those crucial moments that I made sure not to get in my head or become critical. I just told myself to be patient and see what else occurs. There were a couple of times where I chuckled (in a good way) to myself because the story I was generating was so fun, wild, and imaginative. I was like, “Wow, look at what I’m writing down. This is pretty funny and cool!” Keep reading below.

The next few times I did this exercise, I decided to just pick a description from column A and a profession from column B without thinking about it. Just quickly pick one thing from each column and generate a story idea. I wanted to see what would happen if I went with this approach versus the one above where I was more intentional with the pairings. I was pleasantly surprised with this approach because I still found myself generating a story idea for each character I created. Keep reading below.

I ended up generating 12 story ideas! I’m proud of myself because I came up with something each time around, no matter the type of story, the genre, the boldness of it, the simplicity of it, etc. Now that I have done this part, I need to tackle the next steps of the chapter one exercise: Try to give your story ideas a strong wish fulfillment, emotional dimension, market-savviness, and originality. Any that don’t hit all four points, take out behind the barn and Old Yeller ’em. Of the ideas that survive, put the best one aside for later. Keep reading below.

Let’s see how this goes! Hmmm, I feel a part three coming up. Here is the link to Jeffrey Schechter’s story generator exercise: http://mystorycanbeatupyourstory.com/mix-match/