Good morning, fellow artists! Welcome to another exciting edition of my weekly Hollywood blog. On August 17th, I had my hour-long Slamdance Screenplay Clinic consultation over Zoom for my latest feature film script. To prepare for this meeting, I read through my reader’s six pages of coverage over and over again, organized them, and highlighted sections so that I knew what I wanted to address.
As soon as my reader and I met over Zoom, we hit it off immediately, and I felt at ease throughout the entire session. They were kind, friendly, funny, incredibly knowledgeable, and also part of the queer community (which only strengthened our connection). They created a safe space from the top, making it clear that these were just ideas they were offering—I could take or leave any of them at any time.
My reader answered questions and provided clarity on the spot, offering fantastic, creative ideas along the way. I had several “a-ha” moments and shared my enthusiasm as we went. There was even a moment where I used a bit of good-humored inflexibility to stick to my instincts on a choice I made for one of my characters; I heard their perspective, shared why I made the choice, and decided to hold my ground. They offered another character suggestion later that I liked, but again, I opted to stick to my original vision. I made sure to audio-record the session because we covered so much territory, and I knew I wouldn’t remember it all. The following day, I listened to the recording with a fresh mind and took extensive notes. My next step is to combine the original six pages of coverage with my Zoom notes and start weaving them into the next draft of my script.
The other thing I’m so proud of was my ability to simply let it go. Once the meeting ended, I told myself not to think about it until the next day. When I finished taking notes on the recording, I gave myself the same reminder: Let it go. Don’t work on it anymore. I decided to let things settle that week, focus on other projects, and dive into the rewrites the following week.
I am so glad I booked this consultation—it was worth every penny because I walked away with clear, exciting, and tangible tools. Because this process was so smooth and constructive, I’m definitely going to hire my reader again once this next draft is done for another coverage round and Zoom session.
During my weekly career administration meeting this past Monday, August 24th, I shared my consultation experience with my admin partner, and he pointed out something that I hadn’t realized throughout the process. He noted that because the foundation of my script was already so solid, the reader’s notes were designed solely to elevate, heighten, and expand it. Never once did the reader suggest the script was trash or that I needed to tear it down and rewrite it from scratch; every note was meant to heighten the material that was already there. Hearing that made me feel even better about where the project stands.
See you next week!


















